In Response to "100% ----" prompt at Poetic Asides
Harsh April tropical Sun
Shining search lights through eyes,
Turning inward, etching prosaic
reality into sharp relief, too strong for poetry.
Nope. It's no use
I turn up 100% blank,
Not blank verse, as I intended.
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Harsh April tropical Sun
Shining search lights through eyes,
Turning inward, etching prosaic
reality into sharp relief, too strong for poetry.
Nope. It's no use
I turn up 100% blank,
Not blank verse, as I intended.
This work is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-NoDerivs 3.0 Unported License.
3 comments:
Indeed its blank and it left me blank! I suppose I am terrible at poetry. Its good, Since I understood nothing it ought to be good. I am not making fun of you, I don't understand poetry often and I believe it to its beauty.
I was just trying to say that poetry does not come easily to me when reality is starkly prosaic!
That does clear things bit :) I can see light now
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